“It doesn’t matter if you have
failed, if you had been beaten. All that really matters is if you get back up
and try again. Because winning is fun, but winning when nobody thought you
would, is just awesome.”
Thematic appreciation test (TAT) is the
very first test of the Psychology round that is conducted on candidates who
clear the screening process. It consists of 12 stories out of which 11 stories
are hazy and 1 blank slide is presented in front of candidate. You get 30
seconds to think and 4 minute to write the story.
The blank picture
is presented, so as to analyse the thought process of candidate and his ability
to link with the sequence shown to him. This is also linked to his imagination
power as through this blank slide the psychologist tries to gather the idea of
what a candidate has in mind for his future. It might be linked to his/ her
vision, mission of life.
Click here for Tips and tricks for psychology round of SSB
It is also said that the
qualities that the psychologist gathers are compared with those shown in PIQ
and forwarded to GTO and PI officer for crosschecking. So if anyone wants to
fake in SSB it is not at all possible because similar things would be checked
throughout in all the processes and if they interfere then only can a candidate
have his chances for recommendation. Now everybody would be thinking of how to
write an effective story. So here it is. Remember your story should have the
following:
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A hero performing some action
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Description of environmental conditions
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Different characters
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Main theme and story should revolve around that
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Past, present , future related events of story
Few tips to make stories
effective:
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Hero of story as framed by you should have a
name
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Hero should deliver an action which is possible
in real life.
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Theme of story should be positive, try to show
your optimistic nature.
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Age , sex and mood of the hero and relevant
character should also come out of story
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Try avoiding grammatical errors to make story
more effective
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It should be written clearly, so that the
efforts of psychologist goes in extracting qualities and not in guessing what
is written
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Try to convert negative pictures also in positive tone
Click here for Psychology for SSB : Practice Series 1 - TAT
Also read: SSB Experience series: Learn from experience of others
With these tips and tricks in mind lets practice TAT to see our preparedness and we at SSB Vision will evaluate the stories as per appropriateness. So what are you waiting for. Get yourself evaluated.See the SAMPLE PICTURE below. Write your story for this in the comment section and recieve my reviews for free.
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| Sample picture for writing story |
Rules:
1) One person should write one story only along with their names.
2) The story should be written in a time bound manner only and should be written in the same way as one writes at SSB for psychology round, so that the exact exam condition can be replicated.
3) The story in the comment section will only be evaluated. Don't see the stories of other aspirants while writing the story and try to write your own original idea.
4) Remember no answer is right or wrong in psychology. You only need to mention the first thought that comes to your mind after seeing the picture.
1) One person should write one story only along with their names.
2) The story should be written in a time bound manner only and should be written in the same way as one writes at SSB for psychology round, so that the exact exam condition can be replicated.
3) The story in the comment section will only be evaluated. Don't see the stories of other aspirants while writing the story and try to write your own original idea.
4) Remember no answer is right or wrong in psychology. You only need to mention the first thought that comes to your mind after seeing the picture.
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Karan is 5th standard boy, who got selected in quiz competition from his school itself and come back to home to informed his father. . Taking advice from his father and father's fast friends that how to perform well in quiz competition. . . He participated well and won the quiz and get reward. .
ReplyDeleterethink , this is not correct n needs more elements to be introduced. See tips n tricks and again write. Also remember to reflect ur personality in SSB
DeleteRam 21 doing his graduation from mt university from jaipur.Living in hostel his flatmates used to take interest in playing cards and smoking .in a way atracted others as well.ram who himself was avid sports lover encouraged them to take part in outdoor sports instead of wasting crucial time and also degrading their health.to make them to end this menace ram took all to their college menteor who also counselled them and made them understood the importance of why they have come to clg fr studies.and to make time useful indulging in sports and make their clg proud and their parents too.ram also made sure they involve in diff sports like cricket football basketball so that they go fr practise and give focus to their health.ram initiave bore fruit and his friendswere now more focused gtowards their life
ReplyDeleterethink as u missed an important element while writing. See the picture carefully , read tips n tricks n then write back. Reflecting the essence of picture is essential for recommendation. Also remember to reflect ur personality in SSB
Deletesir did i miss the child
DeletePlease read the basic things that shud be present in the story, mentioned in the article , samples and then rethink to write the right thing
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DeleteShishir a young engineer of a mnc who was very much careing for the children once went to a local bar with his friends ganesh and riyas. While enjoying their time in the bar shishir noticed a small kid working as a supplier there. He felt very bad and called the manager and talked to him and admitted the kid to the school under the right to education act. And also met the DC and asked him to tighten the RTE act. DC appreciated him .
ReplyDeletenicely explained. Remember to reflect ur personality in SSB in whatever u do there.
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ReplyDeleteAnand, 32, was playing cards with two of his best friends, Rajeev and Sumit at Sumit’s residence. Sumit's 5 year son Sangeet came and joined them, observing the game. Rajeev suddenly lighted a cigarette and started smoking. Anand immediately objected to it, although Sangeet wasn't his own son. He politely explained to Rajeev that he should not be smoking in presence of children and also alerted Sumit that he should not expose his son to practices like smoking at such a tender age. Rajeev felt embarrassed and apologized, and immediately put off the cigarette and threw it into the dustbin.
ReplyDeleteGud. Please remember to reflect yourself truly in whtever u do at ssb.
DeleteAnup,saurabh & pankaj all three are children traffickers and enjoying the moment with playing cards smoking cigarettes after trafficking of children. During that pankaj called a boy for some work, when anup looked upon him, he got shocked, as aadi was son of anup. As earlier anup worked for children welfare ngo. Due to cz of some financial constraints he indulged in children trafficking business now he realized that bad deeds done by them thereafter he trying to convince his partners to let them drop their homes but his partners refused him.he made strategy to drop children their homes safely executed plan and succeed. Again anup start working for children welfare ngo.
ReplyDeleteGud. Please remember to reflect yourself truly in whtever u do at ssb.
Deletehey JP!! dont you think you are appreciating wrong stories? I appreciate you for your initiative to help candidates to prepare for ssb. This story lacks all the olqs infact it projects a candidate negatively. when we are writing a story we are the hero ourselves and whatever we write is expected to be our approach in same situation. so ayushi has wriiten about traffickers because of financial crisis.. in that case she is projecting herself as acceptor of wrong paths. if she ever hits financial crisis she would turn into a child trafficker. Please guide them in best ways. Regards..
DeleteThanks for taking out time for evaluation anonymously. The plot thought was of child trafficing and this was the first idea that struck her mind and the same was expressed. The way the story unfolds reveals the qualities of the personality and that seems to be a good start.However a negative background might create problem, but these things are personally discussed in the feedback. We prefer and motivate aspirants to work with the very first idea and not fake ideas just for the sake of revealing OLQ.
DeleteRahul was playing cards at his friends home when his friend started smoking in presence of child. He immediately asked his friend to stop smoking. To ensure that same is not repeated in future he explained him how a father is a role model for children and ill effects of even passive smoking. He reminded him whenever he got opportunity. Rahul ensured the same during his future visits at his home. With his efforts his friends realised his mistake. Rahul was happy and never hesitate to point out friends commiting similar mistakes.
ReplyDeleteyou need to see the correct way of writing of the story , the concept identified after seeing the picture is very good, but the way of writing needs a bit of improvement. Also remember to reflect ur personality in whatever you do at SSB.
DeleteThanks a lot for evaluation sir, actually as in reality no one understand Jst by saying once only repeatedly reminding shows results. Same thing I tried to show... And in last line I tried to show continuity by writing that he pointed other friends repeating same... U guidance will b very helpful sir...
ReplyDeleterightly said that practice makes t man perfect. Keep working in the right direction , if any queries are there drop in a mail and get it resolved
DeleteIN THIS picture 4 characters are there all are males one is ram and his two brothers shyam and lakshman and his son luv who is only 8 ram is 32 shyam is 30 and lakshman is 25 all are playing card bec it reminds them of their childhood how they played card with their father when they were poor their father thought them some card tricks with the help of which they are now established magicians and earning good and ram is teaching the same to his som what his father tought to him
ReplyDeleterethink as the theme and action are not impactful for a selection round of officer. Also try to reflect ur personality in whatever u do at SSB
DeleteRamesh is a 31 year old man working in Infosys.He has a son named Rohit.He got his holiday for Diwali and thought of spending it with his friends and family and playing cards at home.
ReplyDeleteHe called upon his freinds for Diwali celebrations and later on started playing cards with them.One of his friends suddenly lit a cigarette and started smoking.A little later his son came up to him to sit besides him.Seeing that Ramesh requested his friend to lit off the cigarette as it would be harmful for his son.His friend obeyed him.He then asked his son to go and play with his friends outside and promised him sweets later.After finishing his game he advised his friend not to smoke infront of kids.He went to his son and offered him sweets and played with him.
Rightly captured the essence, please remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB
DeleteThank you very much sir.you boosted my confidence
DeleteKeep working for your goal in the right direction
DeleteAkshy was a engineer in a company .one day he was invited by his colleague for the dinner.when he reached his colleague home he saw that his other friend who were reached ealry was playing cards and smoking and also a small child was among them.akshy asked his friend to stop smoking in front of the child and also talked with child .he talked with his colleague that smoking in front of child can cause health issue to both of them and also his child may start following him.after listening his words his colleague and friends promised akshy not to smoke I. Fornt of any child and after some time they quitted smoking and for all this they thanked akshy
ReplyDeleteRight theme captured with all the elements, but the flow in the story should be natural , work on that and improve. Also please remember to reflect ur personality in whatever you do at SSB.
Deletesir could you tell me about the natural flow...that how the story indicate that the flow is not natural
DeleteThe flow should have linkage between things happening in the story so it shud be woven properly to give a feel of story in continuity. Also there are certain elements one looks while assessing it. Prefer to read samples and then rethink. Apart from this it shud have reflection of ur personality.
DeleteSudhir(26)a young inspector posted in Kannauj got a call from his men one day and was told about an illegal bar on outskirts of city involving child labour.sudhir immediately took orders from his seniors ,made a team and went to spot.He asked his men to remain in backup while he himself disguised as card plyer and went inside and started playing on a table.He noticed a small boy standing who was there to serve cigarettes and others were smoking and playing cards.sudhir also started playing and quietly observed whole scenario and went back.Next day Sudhir came with his force and raided that bar and arrested it's manager and people playing there.later With help of gov and his seniors he gave custody of children there to an NGO for there better future .Sudhir thnked his men and seniors for their support.
ReplyDeleteperfectly captured, please work on the psychology part to reflect ur personality properly through self introspection technique
DeleteThank you sir..
ReplyDeleteYour guidance will definitely help me
Keep working for your goal in the right direction
DeleteOn the eve of diwali, Mahesh invites his two old friends, Raju and Mohin to play cards. Mahesh lost 2000 rupees and in a mood of playing more. At the same time Mahesh's son Sham comes and ask his father can he recite a story which he recite in his class and won the story telling competition. With his father permission, he started the story which is based on Ramayan most famous gambling game which cost Pandavs their kingdom, wealth and 12 years of prohibition. After he finished, Mahesh realized his mistake and tell the same to his friends. Later everyone decide to give up gambling and promised to each other to spend more time with their families.
ReplyDeleteYou need to introduce some basic elements in the story which are still missing , try to be close to reality and catch the hints given in the picture. Try to be less philosophical. also remember to reflect ur personality in whatever u do at SSB
DeleteAbhishek, sourav and shubham are school friends. After a long time they are gathered and decided to play cards. While they were playing a ayush five year old niece of sourav came and was watching them.In the meanwhile Shubham lightened the cigratee and started smoking. Abhishek interreputed and told Shubham not to do so.It will have a bad impact on Ayush.
ReplyDeleteThis gives a feel of a scene description rather than a story , please elaborate and write properly. Thee elements of basic story seems to be missing. Also remember to reflect ur personality in SSB.
DeleteRamesh, swapnil,kishor are friends living in village .regularly they played cards in their village also they are smoking too.one day while playing cards one small boy came to there and observing them .next day ramesh found same child trying to play card with their friend .ramesh got stucked bcoz if in some days that boys may follow them doing smoking .ramesh talked with his friend and decided to never play a card in village and in front of the small children .They meet that children and guide them how playing cards will affect their life .They decided that they will stop smoking .rather than playing a card and smoking they decided to do some work for construction of new generation .
ReplyDeleteStories shou;ld be realistic in nature and closely reflect your personality. Please revisit the rules , tips , tricks and samples to rethink.
DeleteAmit, Ankit and gaurav were childhood friends, all 3 became software engineers and met after a long time in their hometown. 3 rekindled their friendship and all the light moments they have had. One evening they were at a roadside Dhabha passing their time, Ankit seemed visibly upset due to something when enquired by other 2, he pointed towards the 5-6 years old working as a waiter. All 3 of them decided not to take services from that child and mentioned this to Dhabha owner. From then on the trio decided not eat anywhere where child labours are employed.
ReplyDeletethe cause chosen is really impactful , but give a proper closing in this case. Also there should be proper flow in the stories written. Pleas remember to reflect your personality in the psychology round of SSB.
DeleteRAVI PANKAJ AND VIPIN WERE CHILDHOOD FRIENDS AS DUE TO CONTACT WITH SOME OF LOCAL GOONS THEY FELL IN PRACTISE OF BATTING AND START PLAYING MOST FREQUENT BUT ONE DAY WHEN PANKAJ's SON PRINCE SAW THEM PLAYING HE THEN STARTED PLAYING IT WITH HIS FRIENDS ONE DAY WHEN PANKAJ SEE HIM PLAYING CARDS HE ASKED FROM WHERE HE LEARB THAT HABIT AND PRINCE REPLIED FROM HIM ..AT THAT TIME PANKAJ REALISED THAT HE HAD DONE WRONG AND LEFT PLAYING CARD AND STARTED GIVING MORE ATTENTION TOWARDS HIS RESPONSIBILITY AS A FATHER..
ReplyDeleteEnglish plays a vital role in SSB as thats the common language understood by everyone. Prefer improving that in this case because sometimes it may happen that story being psychologically correct might not be able to create the desired impact. Also remember to reflect ur personality in SSB.
Deletesahil was inivited by his friend vicky for dinner.while they were playing cards. a child from neighbor house came and he requests sahil to make him understand the game...sahil told him the rule and how to make planning and apply logic but convinced the child not to make it as a habit ...he advice him to play with computer online during free time but not make it as habit. and also advice him to focus on study and refrain from taking c igareetes..child understands him and left the room
ReplyDeleteneeds rethinking and improvement in the way of writing . Please do that and see samples. Also remember to reflect ur personality in whatever you do at SSB.
DeleteSanket was the senior police inspector at malad Mumbai. He was assigned the task to stop illegal bars in the area. He met with his subordinates to make plan. He made a covert team to obtain information about the bars. He did burst raids to catch offenders. He recovered illegal money and put criminals behind the bar. He admitted caught kids and women to NGO for assistance. He increased monitoring of the area to prevent future violations. He was appreciated for his work.
ReplyDeleteNeeds partial rethinking. Also one needs to remember to catch all the clues and use them properly. Please remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB.
DeleteAman,a boy aged 10 years lives in sitapur,uttar pradesh.he is a good boy having some fine qualities like respecting elders,doing homework on time,and cooperating with his friends at sports.One day his father and his friends were playing cards and smoking.Aman came suddenly and he felt very bad because he was taught those activities to be not good.he said to his father ,"i want 100 rupees for cigarettes"his father slaped him and told him to be sorry.aman smiled and said ,"i have learnt this from you only".the father became answerless.he then promised his son not to do any such things in future.
ReplyDeleteThe theme selected might be correct but the way of writing needs a lot of improvement. Please review the samples given on SSB vision blog and rethink , write again and do good. Also remember to reflect ur personality in SSB.
Deleterahul, rajeev and ayush were the college friends who met after a long gap.to hang up they went toa restro lounge and were playing cards and started smoking.When the food arrived , rajeev noticed it was a juvenile kid arun working due to illetracy and poverty.He immediately thew the cigarette and talked with arun about his conditions.Lateron while going they took arun with him, talked to his parents and admitted him to a school.today arun passed his school exams with flying colours and thanks to rajeev.
ReplyDeleteThe way of representing things needs to be improved, work on it by reviewing the samples and following the tips n tricks, also remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do in SSB
Deleterohit was a friendly person who would always invite his friends over a get together almost every weekend. they would play cards, drink , smoke and enjoy. but one day, rohit's son ayush asked him to if he could also join to which he once refused but then ayush started crying. realsising this would have a wrong impact on his son and he would also suufer in his studies, rohit decided to arrange these gatherings at some other place, outside home.
ReplyDeleteThe way of writing needs a lot of improvement as the story clearly is not depicting what you wana say and reflect. Also remember to show proper transition in whatever you write in different tenses. Reflect your personality in ssb
DeleteOkay sir. Thank you very much for the feedback.
DeleteKeep working in right direction to achieve your goal
DeleteAlok,Ashish,Anmol are three friends playing cards in Aloks Home.Raghu, Alok's son is enjoying it. Ashish started smoking. Raghu felt uneasy with it. Raghu, himself explained the consequences of it. Ashish realized the importance and put it off. He realized and worked very hard to leave this. Also he realized the problem is massive.Ashish started doing campaigns joining an NGO, to enlighten the mass.
ReplyDeleteThe way of writing needs a lot of improvement as the story does not classify the past , present and future. Remember to reflect your personality in SSB rounds.
DeleteYugandhar 24 year old graduate starts business of solar photovoltaic systems with two best friends Surya and Prashant . After successful completion of first they decides to take a day off and visit Yugandhar's native village . Where they enjoy swimming and wonderful nature's beauty while in afternoon they decide to play UNO playing cards with swapnil nephew of Yugandhar. Whole playing Yugandhar smells smoke he rushes outside and sees barns has catches fire. Yugandhar calls Surya , Prashant and swapnil he instantly rushes towards barn to set free animals, before going there he tells swapnil to start the pump , he tells Prashant call all neighbors for help and dial fire brigade,He tells Surya to cut down the electricity supply, he first rescues animals and then along with friends and neighbors puts the fire in control. Then they find out the real reason of fire.Due to spontaneity and courage shown by all the damage was very less .
ReplyDeleteThe way of expressing things might be good but the real thing is hidden and has not evolved properly. Also an attempt has been made to hide the real personality. Prefer reflecting the real personality in whatever you do at SSB. Discard myths of SSB
DeleteRajat is a 6 yrs old boy.His father has a business of real estate.He has a very bad habits like drinking,smoking and gambling and daily he used to play gamble with friends.Rajat didn't know anything about gambling but he always enjoy it with full of curiosity.As a result one day he told his father to teach me about gambling.His father was totally in shock when he heard it.He realized that Rajat was only 6 and in that age my habits has a huge effect on him which can leads to a worst situation in future.Many of thoughts frightened rajat's father.Therefore his father decided to quit gambling,smoking and all that thinks and will try to become a idle father for his son
ReplyDeleteNice way to represent the thought. Remember to reflect your personality in ssb
DeleteThanku very much sir for suggestion s
DeleteKeep working on the feed back to achieve your goal
DeleteSunil 25, working in intelligence department as an intelligence assistant. He has given a task by senior to disclose a drug racket running in a big hotel.He went to hotel with changed identity to know the reality what's happening. In the picture he is playing cards with the men who r already thr in the hotel. One of them started smoking. After a while a child came to them with drinks. Observing drug racket nd child labour practices, he immediately called his team to caught the criminal red handed. He felt satisfying after completing his task nd criminal behind the bars. He also got award from his seniors.
ReplyDeleteYou need to be innovative and write stories realistically rather than reusing what you read somewhere. Be original and remember to reflect your personality in SSB
DeleteLaddu(10) is a boy live in slum area where he always see the group of adult sitting and playing cards(gamble) and smoking he personally he feel bad to see all this thing he has lost his father when he was 7 years now laddu and her mother is living in that area one day his mother fell ill he has no money to get treatment of her mother so he went to the gambling place to earn money he found the shortest way to get money at that difficult situation he played card earn money went back treat her mother well after few months her mother recovered her health and than she asked frm where you get the money so he told the whole story but after all this her mother feel bad before mother will say something laddu promiseand told her mother that yeah i did wrong i knw but that time i had no option to get money but it is my promise to you i will not repeat this worng work again in life and will do study hard to become something and will help other small kids also that because of any reason they do not have to get into these type of wrong doing this is mi promise to you and after that day he never indulge in wrong work .
ReplyDeleteyou need to rethink the perception and also the way of expressing needs improvement. Also remember to reflect your personality , in whatever you do at SSB
DeleteVijay was a social worker. One fine day he saw that his friend Ram, facing some financial crisis. He then decided to do something for his friend. He called other common friends and explained the financial crisis of Ram. All of them collected some money and given the Same to Ram.then Ram thanked everyone for their help and promise to return their money very soon.
ReplyDeleteThe idea mentioned is irrelevant and needs a lot of improvement. Remember to reflect your personality in whatever you write at SSB and also use new ideas and immediate perception instead of copying things.
DeleteRam,shyam and govind are friends.Rahul is 8yr old,son of ram.He is very obedient and helpful in nature and loves to do something good for the society.He learned in school that smoking is injourious to health.One day rams’s friend that is shyam and govind had come to ram’s house.they started playing cards and smoking.then Rahul entered in the room.he remembered that smoking is injurious to health.he asked his fathervery innocently that if he knows that smoking is injurious to health then why does he smoke?this made all three of them guilty and they stopped smoking.
ReplyDeleteThe future part needs improvement and way of communicating the idea also needs to be changed. Remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB.
DeleteShailesh,22, after completing engineering got a job in a core company.He learned the work and worked hard.On his first salary, he invited raman and rajan, frends from his workplace to his house for dinner. After dinner he along with his 8 year old nephew started playing UNO.while playing, raman started smoking,to which shailesh asked him to smoke outside the house premices as a child is around.Raman understood his mistake and apologised shailesh and his nephew and also promised that this will not happen again.
ReplyDeleteYou need to improve the way of writing and expressing the things as sometime you might have a right idea but expression also becomes important. Also remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB
DeleteRaj who is 22 years old has done his MBA from IIM ahemdabad and is a manager at an MNC. He was working on a project with his colleagues shyam and michael for the past 2 months. Now that they have submitted their project for which they have got appreciation and rave reviews from their bosses. they wanted to celebrate it so they went out to raj's place to have some fun and relax. Raj's younger brother mahesh who is studying in 9th standard is vacationing at his brother's place also joins them to celebrate. While they are playing cards shyam started to smoke which raj starts objecting him for as his younger brother is also there who is a minor plus he also tells him that smoking is a bad habit and he should quit it which shyam accepts it and says he will try to quit and apologieses to everyone.
ReplyDeletegood way of expressing the thoughts. Remember to reflect your personality properly at ssb by doing thorough introspection
DeleteArun is a young passionate boy who had a desire to join indian defense forces and serve for the nation. He prepared well despite of all difficulties due to the family problems and selected as an Officer in Indian Army. He has completed rigorous training at IMA with flying colours and got a leave of one month. while being on leave, he collects the moment by spending time with family and friends. He also likes to play cards with his friends. And he used to play with them also shares his experiences at IMA while training. After leaving for duty, he is well determined to his well performance while serving for country.
ReplyDeleteThe story is pre planned and seems irrelevant to the present context. Please reflect properly to the perception and make stories. Do self introspection to reflect your personality at SSB
DeleteSohan invited his friends on the occasion of his 31st birthday. he and his friends were playing cards in the room and after a long time of playing his son come and told his father it's too late. Dinner is ready and saw his one friend named as ram smoking and he suggest him to not to smoke. It is not good for health and then he leaves away from the room.
ReplyDeleteTry to elaborate the ideas in different times and express them clearly. Also you need to reveal your personality in the stories. This seems more of the description of the picture and not a story
DeleteKaran is 9 years old and lives in a joint family. He has 3 elder cousins who are addicted to gambling. And cause of this environment in his house, is affecting his life and future. He has started giving company to his cousins and it can spoil his future. His parents should have avoid him to give company to his cousins. They should suggest him to make good friends and be a good boy .
ReplyDeleteTry to elaborate the ideas in different times and express them clearly. Also you need to reveal your personality in the stories. This seems more of the description of the picture and not a story. Also express the thought process clearly.
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ReplyDeleteVictor was a student of St. Xavier school, during school time the teacher teach them about health care and discipline, after returning home from school Victor found his uncle playing cards and smoking. Then he go closer to them and said what teacher taught in the class about smoking is injuries to health and what is good, what is bad. Victor uncles realize what they deed about bad behavior and started with new life. They appreciate for his good advice and sincere efforts learning. Then they start living very peaceful and happily.
ReplyDeleteraju is working as a doctor in well reputed hospital he conducts free medical checkups for poor people with coordination of his colleagues and friends. one day he go to his friend ramana's home for celebrating his son birthday after the party over all neighbors are left the home, raju and his friends still stay and playing cards. At that time among them ramana's one of the friend starts smoking then raju asked him to stop it and he explains the effects of the smoking and also tell about the risks in the environment. All the others supports raju then he stops smoking.
ReplyDeleteOnce a boy name naresh cME BACK FROM THE SCHOOL he saw that his brother and his friend are playing cards and recently a even got held in school about "quit smoking" . he saw his brother smoking and immediately went there and starting observing him. and i waited his game to finish . when hs friend left. i started telling him that smoking is not right for him . as a sports person u must know. by utilising the knolwedge he got from that event he helped his bother to quit smoking and also suggested to leave his bad accompany
ReplyDeleteRahul 15, has 2 younger brother, ronit 13 and raghav 8, who with the help of his father and younger brother is helping his youngest brother in poster making competition on world health day
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