"You have got to follow your passion, You have got to figure it out what it is you love, who you really are and have the courage to do that. I believe the only courage anybody ever needs is the courage to follow your own dreams." SSB is one such exam where one needs to be oneself, no study , no extra knowledge will help from different resources. You need to love country and should be ready to dedicate your life for it.
Aspirants have been worried about getting Screened out which is the first hurdle in the dream they saw to wear the uniform. Screening needs one to reveal the officer potential so that they can be recommended for further tests of psychology, PI and GTO. Once recommended in screening one needs to reveal the Officer like Qualities (OLQ) present in them (basically 15 in number). The hurdles aspirant face in screening are the following:
- Aspirants read unknowingly from different resources which have no verified data and the articles present there might not be written by experienced individuals. So they gather wrong knowledge and that's too harmful.
- There are many myths which aspirants hear from different resources and they certainly believe them without knowing the background. On such myths one should always prefer taking expert advice.
- Ready-made solutions are loved by the aspirants and they don't understand that Screening stories have no solution as such. Every aspirant can write a different story for the PPDT round as per their personality and can get selected.
- There are certain essential things that assessors see in the stories that needs to be certainly there in the story and should definitely come out in individual narration too. If that's missing there are no chances for selection.
Aspirants have been requesting SSB Vision to assess their stories to see if its valid for writing in the SSB. Please understand there are always two elements in the story written by the Aspirants which are evaluated by the psychologist. First is the story should have basic elements of a good story and secondly it should reflect the personality of the aspirant. We are posting a picture here and would request the aspirants to read the basic tips and tricks and the solved examples and samples of few pictures and then write the stories here in the comment section. We would evaluate them and would leave my comment for the suitability as per SSB standards. So lets start the practice and see how close we stand to our dream job!!!
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See the SAMPLE PICTURE below. Write your story for this in the comment section and recieve my reviews for free.
Rules:
1) One person should write one story only along with their names.
2) The story should be written in a time bound manner only and should be written in the same way as one writes at SSB for psychology round, so that the exact exam condition can be replicated.
3) The story in the comment section will only be evaluated. Don't see the stories of other aspirants while writing the story and try to write your own original idea.
4) Remember no answer is right or wrong in psychology. You only need to mention the first thought that comes to your mind after seeing the picture.
SSB preparation always takes time so dont wait for the last moment to start your preparation. One should always work through the technique of self introspection which is the best proven technique to get selected for SSB. Wondering what this technique is? Click here to read more.
SSB is all about your personality .So study about yourself only and get selected easily. Form your personality profile in terms of Strength and weakness you have and reflect the same at SSB. Get it done through Mentorship program by being at your home and prepare from there itself. If you have any query personal/professional in nature which is still unanswered, write to me at jayendrapsingh@gmail.com. I would ensure you egt the best possible solution from our team.
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1) One person should write one story only along with their names.
2) The story should be written in a time bound manner only and should be written in the same way as one writes at SSB for psychology round, so that the exact exam condition can be replicated.
3) The story in the comment section will only be evaluated. Don't see the stories of other aspirants while writing the story and try to write your own original idea.
4) Remember no answer is right or wrong in psychology. You only need to mention the first thought that comes to your mind after seeing the picture.
SSB preparation always takes time so dont wait for the last moment to start your preparation. One should always work through the technique of self introspection which is the best proven technique to get selected for SSB. Wondering what this technique is? Click here to read more.
SSB is all about your personality .So study about yourself only and get selected easily. Form your personality profile in terms of Strength and weakness you have and reflect the same at SSB. Get it done through Mentorship program by being at your home and prepare from there itself. If you have any query personal/professional in nature which is still unanswered, write to me at jayendrapsingh@gmail.com. I would ensure you egt the best possible solution from our team.
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Remember : "If you want to get ahead in life so everyday study yourself and make yourself better than the past day."
mahesh was 22 year old boy in his final year of engineering degree. he was not getting any job offers and was rejected 5 times. but his liveliness and perseverance made him work harder. we can see in the picture he is confident and giving his interview. Ultimately he was selected in the company and felt very happy and self-satisfied.
ReplyDeletethe theme is fine but you need to work on the way the story shud be written. You can study the samples for tht. Also remember to reflect ur true self in psychology.
Deleterahul was clas 12 stdnt. he wntd to do wll in board exms. he mde a schdule of sbjcts 2 b studed, gave xtra tim 2 phy he was weak in it, donloded prev yrs qstions, slved them, mde list of imp qstns,gave mock tests, discused problms with his techrs & frnds
ReplyDeleteCNTD. on weekends made rvisns, with psage of time felt cnfident of his prep. in the board exams he gave his best and was hppy with his prformnce. he was thnkful to his tchers, prnts and frnds for their suport and motivation without which it wasnt pssible
Deleteok. Also remember to reflect ur true self in the psychology round.
DeleteNakul was an average student of class 12th and besides he was very passionate about his sports which was cricket n make career in cricket but he was daily scolded by his parents cause of study, he acknowledged and got good Marks on board exam later on now he discussing and taking advice from his coach to make career in cricket
ReplyDeleteThe flow of the story is improper. As per the requirement though the concept/theme is good , still proper way of writing should be implemented. Also remeber to reflect ur true self in the psychology part.
DeleteImproper?? Please elaborate sir. . . So that I can improve it
DeleteAs told in the instructions , there are two types of appropriateness needed for picture to be correct. First psychologically what the aspirant has depicted , and what his/her story depicts abut the personality . The assessors also see the appropriateness as per defense standards. read instructions and tips given in relevant articles for improvement.
DeleteRahul was a 21 years young boy...Lived in small village of Gujarat namely akodara..He works as a social server ...After the demonetization he observed
DeleteThat people of his village are not using mobile banking...So he made an organisation of young volunteer and went to home to home to make people aware about it....Also they introduced people about the lucky grahak Yojana
Under which they can earn 1lakh cash prize..As soon as Rahul plan start wrkngg ...Now people are using mobile banking n also get benefitted through lucky Yojana....Now every individual of that village are using PTM for their daily household works....They olll thanked Rahul n his team for their initiative ...Govt also awarded Rahul
The story needs a lot of improvement and the way of expressing and writing also needs a improvement. Please remember that the story should reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB.
Deleteram was a class 12 student who had given board exam . due to his hardwork and dedication he cent percent in all 5 subject. impressed by his sincerity and dedication the principal of his school called him on his cabin to congulate him and to ask for his plan future career choice so that he can guide according to his choice.
ReplyDeleteGud thought process psychologically. Be clear abut who would be ur hero and remember that it shud reflect ur personality. The first parameter is fyn in the story , fr assesing the personality reflection need to knw u more. Also one need to reflect the tru self in psychology
Deletesir how can one reflect onself personality in ppdt??who would be my hero i didn't got that thing ?
DeleteReflecting personality simply means to project the reality of ur personality and not what u read n is completely different from ur personality.... whatever one writes in psychology shud be something one wud definitely try in real life if the situation be. For doing this only self introspection is done
Deleteram was the production manager of abc.co pvt ltd. he was very gard working and dedicated. one day his boss called him and congrulated him. and also bos asked him new suggestion for improvement for good improvement and consumer satisfaction. and also boss alerted him him to be competitive because in market there is cut throat competition. so ram decided to work accordingly
ReplyDeleteYou need to follow the basic guidelines for success. See the sample stories and tips for improvement. The plot chosen is gud but still the basic elements are missing. Remember to reflect ur personality in psychology part of SSB.
DeleteSourabh was a student of 11th standard. He was not only the monitor of class but also conducted many school events. His principal called him to organize a dance competition in school. He accepted the task, went through the depth of knowledge, collected previous records and discussed the matter with respected teachers. A few students volunteered for the same. He divided the work equally among themselves i.e. booked the hall, time and venue, sent invitees to all, arranging trophies and prize, refreshment and drinks in tea time, a room for rehearsal, toilets cleaning, vehicle parking arrangement, for safety medical aids and fire fighting system, watched out the lights and backup arrangement. Finally with cooperation of all, the done it well and later they analysed among themselves their performance.
ReplyDeleteV gud . Please remember to reflect ur personality in psychology rounds of SSB.
DeleteVikram passed his engineering and came back to village. On coming there, he was sad to see the pathetic condition of his village.There were continuous power failures, improper water supply, and the lack of staff in primary health center. He decided to do something for the betterment of his village.he met with sarpanch and wrote to Deputy commissioner about the problems faced by village.On not getting proper response he decided to visit himself to DC to apprise him about the problems. On taking a note of it. Dc assured him of the timely redressal of the grievances. Within two months of time, everything was settled down there and everyone was happy with vikram's initiative. He was admired by all.
ReplyDeleteNice idea and theme that u brought in the story , but remember to include few basic elements in the story tht are really essential.... read the sample pictures and the tips for more details. Overall gud attempt. Remember to relflect your true self in the psychology round of SSB
DeleteHardeep a smart worker, also a good debater, is called by his principle for the discussion of upcoming national level debate competition.he had won several state and national level competitions on the behalf of his APS.
ReplyDeleteAll his teachers had great expectations for him related to this upcoming competition. But he refused for his participation providing a suitable reason for his decision. The reason was that as he was participating since the last 2 years and had done a great job in taking his school to great heights,
So now he wanted his cooperates to go forward representing his cooperative and helpful nature, making his teachers feel proud once again on him.
As per the flow of the story the theme is gud but few elements needed in the story are missing. You are suggested to go through the relevant articles and updates along with the samples to improve. Also remember to reflect ur personality in the story.
DeleteRahul was working as a technician in HAL. One day he was called by senior executive and asked him to deliver a lecture as a part of continuity training class. Though he was new and had little knowledge. He said yes and started preparing.
ReplyDeleteHe prepared on transmitter of SRE radar. He issued the technical publication from library, studied it thoroughly, cleared the doubt from seniors and internet. Organised his content to deliver max important information in allotted time with special emphasis on doubts he faced during early phase. He took the lecture in front of equipment to make others understand easily. He gave his best for lecture and voluntarily took lectures later on also..
ReplyDeleteNicely written and the theme chosen is also gud. Please remember to reflect ur personality in the stories in psychology round of SSB. See sample stories in other relevant articles on this blog to improve the way of presenting the data.
DeleteSir I am a technician in avionics. I compared the picture with my real life situation and wrote the story under time constraints..
ReplyDeleteWell related and good work. Just a bit of improvement needed as mentioned in the other comment.
Deletethe picture i saw two men at the age around 43 and 24 both are in positive mood.i percieve that lead character of my story is helping to conduct awareness program.
ReplyDeleterajesh is an active social worker living in a outskirt of a coastal city.one fine sunday morning he and his friends were playing on the beach.he notied that the beach area was fullof plastic and non degradable waste caused by people .he and his friend decided to create awareness program of recycling and reusing .they went to the village administrative office and requested to support and guest the program .the people living around where requested and were given awareness.
Its inappropriately linked to the given picture and certain ideas are forcefully inserted to make it better. It needs a lot of improvement. Please read the samples and the tips given on SSB Vision for improvement and also do self introspection to properly reflect ur personality into the psychology round of SSB.
Deletefrom this picture i have percieved two people are there of between 25-35 , they are in positive mood.
ReplyDeletesureh 26 year old a junior doctor , he is posted in urban hospital , during his duty on regular basis he was handling the case of child malnutrition problem , for this reason many one had to face death . and thus the way the child mortal rate is increasing . so he went to his hospital super and urged him to give permission along with few medicine and so that he could help him in spreading awareness about malnutrition among the rural areas , . his senior helped him and now he is spreading about its effect on rural areas
Good idea chosen and well written , but u shud end the story properly and frame the future part correctly..... also try to reflect ur personality in the psychology round of SSB for recommendation.
DeleteRajesh was a 39 year old newly appointed Principal of a convent school. He came to know a 15 years, bright student Zeeshan has now degraded his performance. He called him and on inquiry came to know that he was having some family issues which lately troubled him so he couldn't concentrate on studies. Rajesh took initiative, he consoled Zeeshan ,told him not to focus on such short comings,if he will score good grades all things will be sorted back, moreover he also reminded him of his past achievement,provided him all the study material and kept on guiding him till his final exams. He studied well and was finally scored good marks
ReplyDeleteNice concept used in the picture description, please remember to reflect ur personality in all rounds of psychology
Deletethnxx.......sir
DeleteSarabjit was serving in Indian army .He got guidance from officer to bekom an officer in Indian army .he done his best and bekome and officer .after training he got an infantry unit where soldiers were not trying for courses aur other education programs.during his Fallon he gave guidance about education and how to bekome officer in Indian army..he collect many soldiers motivated them and they applied for ACC and other entries . soon person started bekome officer from his unit and soldiers started going volunteers for army courses and increased their education.due to this there living standard and standard of unit improve a lot.
ReplyDeleteNicely put , a very positive story , and im sure you tried to reflect ur personality in this attempt as its followed across psychology part. Please follow few basic rules while writing the story as each and every story shud have certain necessary elements. Please refer relevant articles for that. Also try to work on your english as that helps in creating a good impression.
DeleteRakesh,who is the president of the government degree college kathua noticed the various incidents of outsiders being entered in the collegs premises and bullying the college students and eve teasing the girls and disturbing the study friendly environment. He brought the issue before the PRINCIPAL ,asked the principal to make arrangements to issue identity card to the college students immediately, make proper arrangementa at the college gates to check the entry of the unwanted elements,install the Cctv cameras at important places and make sure that the students follow the proper uniform for the college. The principal noticed all the mistakes minutely and take proper actions and solve this issue
ReplyDeleteGud theme and way of writing , though the future and ending can be more proper. Please remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at psychology round of SSB
DeleteRakesh is the team leader of the human resources department of the company he works for. A couple of days back, his boss had condemned him in front of his subordinates for a decision he had taken. Rakesh felt demoralised, but was confident that his decision was not wrong. Thus, he went up to his boss and clarified his point. His boss looked into the matter and realized Rakesh was right. He apologized to Rakesh and asked him to go forward and implement his plan.
ReplyDeletethe story seems to be limited with less focus on past and future elements, please revisit the tips again on ssb vision , if needed , read samples and come back with powerful story . Theme chosen for the pic is very gud. Please remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB.
Deletebut sir, i do need to keep in mind the word limit of 100 words, isn't it?
DeleteThere is no defined word limit but yes one need to utilize the space given and the time to write the stories, so you are free to use words but usually seeing the space and the time people end up writing 100-130 words.
DeleteManoj, 30, was a union leader of a sugar mill, he upset about the apathy shown by mill owners towards workers. All machines were outdated and dangerous. Manoj asked for a meeting with the mill owner and showed him details and dangers of operating of those machines. Mill owner at first was sceptical about Manoj but after finding it right , he ordered for change of entire machinery. The mill owner thanked Manoj in the last.
ReplyDeleteThis needs to be rethink in a different manner as its far away from reality. Please read the instructions carefully and inculcate necessary elements. Read samples if you need help. Also remember to reflect ur personality in psychology round.
DeleteManoj,15, was a school boy famous as he was a cricket player. But he was not doing well in studies. One day his principal called him and asked why his grades are low. The principal got know that Manoj is having difficulty in understanding his subjects. The principal asked manoj's teachers to tutor him. Manoj started taking after school classes and showed results within in a few days while continued playing cricket. Manoj performed just average in his pre-board exams but he had gained respect of his teachers and Manoj was also selected for District cricket team.
DeleteNice improvement
DeleteSuresh a 25 Year old design engineer who works in a well known company was assigned a new project by the CEO of the company. Suresh conducted the initial survey and research and then presented it to the CEO. CEO was happy with his ideas and asked him to go head. Suresh then coardinated with his team, took thier suggestions and corrected their mistakes and finished the project before the deadline.
ReplyDeleteThe CEO abdthe Client were impressed and appriciated Suresh and his team.
Nicely portrayed. Please remember to reflect ur personality in whatever you do at SSB
DeleteManish is a young, energetic and hardworking student who is in 4th year of his engineering.while he was in college, he noticed that the surrounding of his college is not very clean.In this picture he went to the principal of the college with an idea to organise a 'swach bharat abhiyan' in his college with the help of the students. he also mentioned that this will not only help clean the premise but also be a good exercise for the students.after considering all this, the principle approved the idea, they organised the idea and there college looked different from there on.
ReplyDeletea slight modification can help it make better , so go thru the article to see the necessary elements and way of writing. Please remember to reflect ur personality in psychology round
DeleteSurendra was a librarian in SPS school noida. He was assigned the task to digitise the library of the school by the principal. He searched internet of various software to do the same. He made a pros and cons list along with their cost to get the approval of the principal for the budget. He purchased the software and get it installed on library computers. He made a team to enter details of the books into the software. He put barcode
ReplyDeleteon the books to identify them individually. He got barcode scanners installed on the issue and deposit counter to make the process fast. He installed books scanning machine and cctv cameras to prevent theft. He submitted the details of the completed project to the principal and got appreciated.
nicely put in. Please remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB.
DeleteMahesh was a bank manager to keyur Vyasa bank..while being in the office he was giving study help to his peon Rajesh who was graduate and wanted to be upgraded within the office..on holidays and spare time he guided him correctly and assisted him in understanding bank terms and practicised him some interview which brought emmense confidence in mahesh..in the very first chance mahesh cleared his all test and joined the office as a clerk after few week training and upgraded his life which was a motivation to other too..
ReplyDeleteidentified concept is gud , but few basic elements are missing , review the samples and see the tips to write it properly. Also remember to reflect ur personality in SSB
Deletethere are two character on is karan who is 60 and other is shubham who is 16 year old karan in his childhood wanted to become a ips officer but due to his financial crisis and lack of guaidance he didn't made it but now he is a teacher who after the school teaches poor kids to achieve to they want to shubham is poor and karan is poor and want to become a CA and shubham is helping him on this
DeleteHi deepesh , please work on this as it needs thought improvement. Also it has missing elements which are essential to classify it a gud story. Also remember to reflect ur personality in whatever you do at SSB.
Deletesir what elements are missing if you can please tell me
DeletePlease refe the article and other relevant articles to have a clear picture of essential elements that one needs to have. Sample stories can also be referred for this purpose. I am sure you will evolve with answer.
DeleteAman was a final year B.tech student and in the last sem when he was sittinfg for the placement he was not selected by the companies .he was out in the interviews so he decided to work hard he Improved his technical and communication skills and got selected for the Japanese mnc automobile company for his sucess his hod call him into his office and congratulated him
ReplyDeleteTry to read the rules and improvise, though the idea captured is perfect. Way of writing needs improvement. Please learn to reflect your personality in SSB
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ReplyDeleteAmit was a NCC cadet .he felt the need to make people aware of health and hygiene.he drew a plan and shared with his ANO.he convinced him to organise a camp and cleaning campaign.he decided time venue,made sitting and all other necessary arrangements.he made group of cadets and divided the work accordiny.one the decided day camp begun with the speech of ANO sir.in camp he told people that they shud not let d water and garbage deposit near their home as it cause many diseases .he also askd them to dump thier waste properly.he convinced them to join cleaning campaign.people were very much impressed with him and joined campaign.they all together cleaned area he was very happy seeing result and planned for future campaign.
ReplyDeleteSir plz evaluatemy story
Few elements are missing , rest the theme captured is imapctful. Keep working in the right direction and see sample stories for more clarity. Also remember to reflect your personality in SSB.
DeleteKishor is a 32 year old.he is head master of secondary school in stara. One day while coming to school he saw on footpath of street his some student are smoking .He come to school and arrange small meeting with teacher and discussed the issue of student smoking and ask suggestion for stopping this.after discussion he decided to arrange parents meeting secretly with some specialist doctor to find out the way to stop.also he talked with that student about that and tell them how dangerous smoking is.suggest them to stop .After some day student stopped smoking and do their well in studies.
ReplyDeletepre conceived ideas, stories might be harmful. It should be related to the personality of the person and shud reflect the same. Think and link with the present context as inserting actions nt even close to picture might lead to rejection.
DeleteAjay is a 22 years old final year engineering student. He gave AFCAT exam and cleared his exam. He has some doubt related to SSB process. In his college, a teacher who taught him in the 5th sem was group captain in IAF. He went to the teacher and ask him for help. Teacher briefly explained him about the SSB process and tell few tips and tricks to clear SSB. After clearing his SSB, Ajay went to meet his teacher to say thanks for helping him.
ReplyDeleteprefer selecting the appropriate plot while writing story and also it shud reflect ur personality elements in whatever you do at SSB.
DeleteRam, 21 year old, was the only engineer from his village Pachora. His father was a farmer and farming was the only source of income for their family. seeing his dedication and excellency in academics his father permitted him to continue his studies after high school. As Ram was a scholar he easily got admission into govt. Engineering college of Pune. Today was his campus interview. he cleared all the rounds and this was his final round. The interviewers were very impressed by his resume. He answered every query asked by them very confidently. Finally he was selected for the job as Project Engineer. with the help of technology he made the farming in his village easy and efficient. He also introduced the use of internet to the people. He has not only made his parents proud but his whole village is proud of him.
ReplyDeleteRam, 21 year old, was the only engineer from his village Pachora. His father was a farmer and farming was the only source of income for their family. Seeing his dedication and excellency in academics his father permitted him to continue his studies after high school. As Ram was a scholar he easily got admission into govt. Engineering college of Pune. Today was his campus interview. he cleared all the rounds and this was his final round. The interviewers were very impressed by his resume. He answered every quetion asked by them very confidently. Finally he was selected for the job as Project Engineer. With the help of technology he made the farming in his village easy and efficient. He also introduced the use of internet to the people. He has not only made his parents proud but his whole village is proud of him.
ReplyDeleteThe concept is well thought and appropriate , but remember that u need to work on improving the way of writing. Also try to reflect urself in every round of SSB.
Deleteanil a young doctor posted in hospital in urban area . on his duty on regular basis he faced child malnutrition and as a result most of them are taken to hospital on critical conditon this thing actually rise the rate of child mortal rate . what i saw in this pic anil went to his hospital super to made him aware abot that and also asked him for help as he want to go into the rural areas and want to made them aware about child prot0ection , his super asured him that he will get all type help
ReplyDeletePlease go thru the samples for identifying where you went wrong. The concept used is strong but the way of writing needs improvement. Also remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB.
DeleteSambhav, 23 yrs old wanted to do MBA from IIM-Kolkata. He noted down the syllabus and process of selection in the college. He bought books to prepare for the common entrance exam. He read English articles and magazines to improve his vocabulary. He prepared himself for the current affairs GD's. He practised quantitative questions to improve his efficiency. He took online test series to plan his exam and improve on mistakes. He cleared the written test and got called for interview. He answered the questions to the best of his abilities and got selected for the college.
ReplyDeleteNicely written , please remember to reflect ur personality in SSB.
DeleteRahul has completed his b.tech and as per his choice wants to join indian army. He got the call for SSB, so he went to his uncle who is a retired army personnel to take his guidance on hiw to face SSB and get through all the rounds of SSB. His uncle provided him all the essential details about SSB and he works on all those point told to him and cleared the SSB.
ReplyDeleteRethink the idea and develop.. also remember to reflect ur personality in psych rounds of ssb
Deleterajesh completed his graduation from jaipur an d was preparing for his ssb interview.for clearing the interview rajesh thought to start from today.he along with his friends used to practise for gds discussing on daily current affairs.rajesh also used to read newspapers daily hindu.used to read blogs and surf net for anything useful.rajesh used to do daily exercises so us as to make himself fit and mentally prepared .rajesh used to practse daily the various tests so as to make himself confident fr the d day.his preparstion bore fruit and he cleared his interview with flying colours
ReplyDeleteRethink as the ideology is conceptually wrong. Also refrain from writing pre conceived ideas that actually harm the aspirants. Also remember to reflect the personality in SSB that you get to know after introspection.
DeleteRohan is a defence aapirant. presently he is in his very first ssb if life. The interviewing officer intervi5 him thoroughly.His interview last around one and a half hour .The interview went very well because rohan has prepared very much for ssb.After 5 days when the result was announced,Rohanwas selected in indian army.This is the dream day for Rohan afthis rohan informed his parents about this and He Had tears in eyes while talking to his parents.
ReplyDeletesir howz this story and please tell in which direction I have to work hard to write better stories.
Yu need to rethink as this is a pre conceived idea being used and not the stimuli that this picture sets. Also remember to reflect the personality in SSB that you get to know after introspection.
DeleteRohan was final year engg. Student . College annual function was coming so rohan had very good event that he want to organize so he discuss his whole plan with his prinicipal. He wants to organize a event in which he will describe whats goin on in india nowdays so after taking permission from prinicipal and clutural head he start preparing and divide different tasks to his members . College fest was started and his event gone very well no. Of students and teachers came to his event . Every one congratulates rohan and his team for succesfully organize of event.
ReplyDeletethe way of writing needs improvement . Please refer the samples and then the same idea can be well developed. Also remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB.
DeleteAjay was a student of class 12 and had also passed all India senior. Secondary certificate examination held by CBSE board in the month of March with flying colours and had applied for scra examination which was held in the month of June and he had qualified in written examination and had also qualified for interview. Now he had appeared in front of interviewing board for the analysis of his personality for the suitability of his job for which he had applied for...now the results are out and he is selected for the training which will start in the month of June.
ReplyDeleteThe theme might be correct but the way of writing needs improvement as the flow is hindered. Please refer to the tips , tricks and the samples for the same. Also remember to reflect ur personality in SSB
DeleteNiraj was final year engineering student. Along with his studies, he was good at extracurricular activities.because of this he was placement coordinator of his department. Since it was the last semester,HOD asked to niraj about placement scenario of students. Niraj promised that this year our college will get more placement offers.so he motivated all his classmates to apply for various government exams and private jobs. He also made them aware about varios job websites. he talked to HR of various industries to conduct campus interview in there college.also he contacted alumni of college for job opportunities. With his efforts number of students got placed in different industries.Niraj set an example to his junior as placement coordinator and appreciated by all staff members.
ReplyDeleteNicley thought and written, keep working in this direction n remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB.
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ReplyDeleteRam at the age of 28 started thinking about the cancer, whether he has it or not.He is a chainsmoker but want to quit smoking as early as possible.So he went to a cancer specialist (Doctor) and shared his problem of smoking .Also he shared how it got started ,he said he got influenced by his senior(Tej) who was brilliant in chess (Rajs favourite indoor game).So he (Ram) started thinking like he can play chess better then him (Tej) by initiating smoking,as it will improve my career as he continued doing it after starting.So he asked Tej how much he smokes a day ,Tej told me around 5.And He started with one more than him 6/day.Later he (Raj) came to know that this is not good for my health,RAj just read about it but didnot experienced it.And also it is neither helping me out for becoming the good player in chess. Finally Doctor understands the whole situation.Done his check up.All the reports are normal.Also advised Raj not to smoke again.He quits smoking after that day.And now became a very famous chess player and also an inspiration.
nice idea that you thought of Himanshu , but remember you need to work on the way of writing as things are not properly mentioned and the flow gets disturbed. Also remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do in psychology round of SSB.
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ReplyDeleteasif was final yr bcom student ..after coming semester he had his afsb.....but he was not prepare..... also he was anable to afford coaching....he dicided to do it by himself...he read the procedure online....and...he got what he exactly need to do..for interviev..he took part in varios elocution,debate..participated..in ncc...and introspect himself...gave mock inter viev to his uncle teacher....and ssb he presented well...and was selectet..
ReplyDeleteRethink and improve.... also refer the tips and tricks along with sample story solutions for improvement. Remember to reflect your personality in psychology round of SSB.
DeleteRamesh 31 was serving in Indian Army as NCO. he received his call from service selection bd. One day morning he met his company commander as asked the procedure for the bd. This campany cdr has taken the initative and started helping he with all his dought and the boosting his moral high. finally ramesh went to the bd but he could nt made in first attempt but he didnt leave the hope. Again applied for the service selection and this even work harder from next time and able to become an army officer in the Indian army. His company cdr feel proud and give the example of ramesh to other and motivate them to apply and achieve your goal.
ReplyDeleteOK , but you need to improve the way you express the things.. Also remember to reflect your personality in this round of SSB.
DeleteSenthil is first year engineering student.Because he is coming from tamil medium he is unable to go with the english lecture taken in his college.So he is decided to get to ask help from his teacher. He met with his english teacher and ask how to get fluenced in english knowledge. His teacher give him advice. He practice regularly as said by his teacher and after some time he feels good and keep on practicing and he used to take lectures in his classroom which he uses as better platform to improve his english knowledge .finally he completed his degree with good marks and now he is well fluency in english knowledge.
ReplyDeleteNice theme but learn to express properly and you will do wonders.... also remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB
DeleteSir explain me how to express and i wrote this story if we work continously whether it will be correct or wrong?
DeleteYes it will be correct if you continuously work on ur personality n reflect t same .. work thru self introspection. Moreover see the samples on ssb vision and then practice.
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DeleteArun was a student of Chemistry 2nd year Venky college. His college was organising a national confrence on environmental sustainability and being a member of chemical society his department head called him and had talks with him that they need volunteers as well as sponsorship for the food at confrence other expenses they had from college . He just then called his mates and tell them to send a message to the class for need of volunteers and also he made a plan about sponsorship that which cafes and institution they need to approach for. and then with the talk with head he made a proposal and then started approaching for sponsorship around 15 days he managed to get sponsorship of 50k and volunteersvolunteers for confrence as well.
ReplyDeleteChosen theme is good and you need to work a bit on expressing your thoughts, also the ending needs improvement. Remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB
DeleteSir, can you please tell me more about expressing my thoughts as you said.
DeleteThe story should have a proper flow of data , i would suggest to kindly go through the provided samples, just to see the way of writing and then apply the same. Also the reflection of ur personality is important.
DeleteBalu is the MD of his small construction company. He is a very honest person and generous to his subordinates
ReplyDeleteIt's all going good . one day there comes the demonitisation of old notes 500 & 1000 by the modi government
The labours in the company become panic and some of them started leaving the company and went to their village . when this problem become serious the company manger angoor tells to the MD balu .
The main problem was that some labours don't have bank accounts. Then balu talks directly to the labours that don't to become panic and he will help them to start bank accounts and said to them that be the part of change
Theme needs to be applied properly and also the way of expressing things needs improvement. See samples, tips and tricks on SSB vision n work on it. Remember to reflect your personality in SSB.
DeleteRamkrishnan was a class 8th student of Pattayam village in Kerela. He was a brave and intellegent boy, a bit beyond his years. One day The S.P. of district Mr M.Radhaswamy came to his village and he was called. He was a bit afraid but went to meet the big officer without hesitation. The officer was elated and told the boy that he was to be conferred by a gallantry award. This was because he last year saved 4 of his classmates from drowning in nearby river. He was to receive the award this 26th January. Ramkrishnan became very happy and ran back home to give this goodnews to his parents.
ReplyDeleteNicely written , just see that the ending is proper and remember to reflect ur personality in whatever u do at SSB
DeleteAkshay is 16 year old boy in 8th grade.He has a curious mind of solving problems with more than one solutions.Ramesh is akash's maths teacher of around 42years in age.He is preparing akshay for international olympiad and gave him a difficult problem which ramesh solved before time with analternate solution.They are currently disscussing the possibilities of solution.
ReplyDeleteThe way of representing things needs to be improved, work on it by reviewing the samples and following the tips n tricks, also remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do in SSB
DeleteSir, In the picture shown i have seen two characters Both Male age 35 and 23 years mood Neutral.
ReplyDeleteAction:- Discussion about organising a sports event.
Story:- Raju, a 3rd year BE student of AIT college bangalore is a sports head and cricket captain of his college. In the coming semester his college has taken up a responsility to organise inter-university cricket tournament in his college ground being the sports head of the college the responsibilty has been given to him. He along with his teammates gathered volunters, discussed all the possibilties and requirements and divided work among themselves first team will take care of advertising and arrange tent items for players and commentators to rest, second team will take care of arranging refreshments and water facilities, third group will prepare ties, arrange umpires, and buy new balls, Fourth group will give welcome address to the chief guest arrange for trophies and help other groups simultaeneously. He asked everyone to meet every evening to discuss the progress. On the event day every thing went according to the plan, his teammates were appreciated by the coach and final day when the tournament was successful he appreciated his teammates, Thanked them and gave a small success party of samosas and cold drinks.
Good way of representing the thoughts, please remeber to reflect your thoughts in whatever you do at SSB
DeleteSr. Engineer Suresh was working in Electrical Department of Water Treatment Plant. The safety manager of the firm called him to organise Safety Awareness Week from 4th mar-10 Mar 2017. He accepted the given opportunity. As task was given on 2nd of Mar, time remaining was less. he called his colleagues, divide the work equally and started preparing with them. They planned different task on different days intially by flag hoisting, safety pledge. Then substituent days was Safety Awareness Play, Quiz Competition, Extempore, healthy discussion about safety equipments i.e. use of safety helmet, safety goggles, ear plugs, face shields, safety shoes, electrical resistance hand gloves etc. His team sent invitation to participants, respected seniors etc. They arranged refreshment, cleaned wash rooms, changing rooms for participants and organized it well. At the end of task, winners was awarded with prize as per their ranking. They ended well and analyzed that team work really matters a lot and happily enjoyed the event.
ReplyDeleteNicely written, please remember to do proper self introspection and reflect your personality in all the rounds of SSB
DeleteDanny is an IT engineer. He has completed his Be in 2016. and he is currently looking for a decent job as an software Engineer. He had submitted his resume to various companies and expecting to get a call from those companies. One day Danny Got a Call from a major IT company named TCS. He came to give the interview in its city office where the recruitment was going on. Interviewers checked his personality and knowledge in and out through various tests conducted in different stages like Aptitude Test, Technical knowledge test, English writing test, Personal Interview and GD. Danny Performed Well and was confident in each and every stage. Interviewers were very happy from Danny's Performance and to the matter of surprise Danny was among the few who had actually made it. Thus Danny got his dream job and a rputed one too of a software Enginner.
ReplyDeletethe future part of the story needs to be expressed well, also remember to do proper self introspection and reflect ur personality in everything that you do at SSB
DeleteSir in how many words we need to write this PPDT???
ReplyDeleteThere is nothing fixed in this regard, as its not a english exam. However as per the requirement and the writing speed, it may vary from 100-150
DeleteRaghu is a class 12 student in KV Koraput.Looking into the problems of the poor people he formed a group to help the poor.He is asking the principal Mr Raman Gupta for the permission and explaining about this initiative of collecting the old and unused clithes from teachers,students,public and distributing it to the needy ones. Mr. Raman Gupta got higly delighted about this and became one of the active members of this noble initiative.
ReplyDeleteThis initiative proved out to be of great help to the poor.
The way of writing and expressing the idea needs improvement. Also remember to reflect ur personality in whatever you do at SSB.
DeleteRohit had always been an average student and had got 82% marks in twelfth standard. he had always thought of pursuing medical stream as he loved biology but couldn't do so as his father was not in a position to finance medical studies. He was a bit worried regarding how to go about it. Then it struck his mind to meet Mr. prasad, his neighbour and a career counsellor in a college for the suitable advice. Mr. Prasad after analysing his situation informed him of various scholarship tests and other sources of obtaining an education loan. Mr. prasad even talked to Rohit's father and assured him not to be worried about the finances as rohit has the ability to perform well in life and will definitely recover his education costs after becoming a successful doctor.
ReplyDeleteWell described and nicely explained. A great improvement as compared to the last attempt. Remember to reflect your personality in SSB after proper self introspection
DeleteThank you very much Sir. Can you please put up more pictures for evaluation?
DeleteSure, will post relevant articles soon
DeleteMahesh is a final year engineering student,one fine day after completing his scheduled studies in afternoon he was heading to boys hostel from Library for lunch,while going to hostel he saw some strange people harassing his juniors in the college premises(as college was next to hostel), he then went straight to them and tried to settle the things but in process he got some beatings too,but at the end he settled the issue and called the staff members of college and handed over the case to them,after handing over the authority learnt all the things and then to confirm they called Mahesh and asked what exactly did he saw,then after explaining the things the strangers were found guilty and were handed to police, In this way Mahesh saved his Junior from some serious problem and did what a Senior should have done.
ReplyDeleteThw way of expressing needs a lot of improvement and also how to represent the idea also needs a change. Remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB
DeletePlease suggest how to improve all these things ?
DeleteYou need to work on your profile through self introspection first as then you will be knowing yourself better and then able to reflect properly
DeleteRajesh was scl Cpt. Of his scl.he had to organise a function on 2nd Oct in scl.But there atendence rate was very low in scl in senior classes so he alog with scl adjudent went to school head master and discuss his idea of calling the parents of defaulters and impose fines on them aloge with last warning. So scl authority consider his idea do call the parents and give last warning to drfaulters this again in crease the attendance rate in scl so Rajesh organised function very well.
Deletethe structuring needs a workout. The idea seems feasible and can be worked out to write a good story. Also try to work on your personality through self introspection and reflect the same at psychology
DeleteMahesh was a 22 year old young boy.When he came back home for his holidays he realised that his younger sister had already given 10th exam .She got 85 percent marks in her exam.He asked her about her interest and got to know that she wanted to join science stream.He got the admission forms of various schools of good repute filled them and went on with her for interview to all the schools.Finally she got admission in one of the good school on the basis of her merit.He admitted her ,bought her books also admitted her in tuition classes .He wished her good luck ,took blessings of parents and went back your his posting area.
ReplyDeleteThe picture needs to be analysed properly and then the story should be correlated with the reality. Also remember to reflect your personality in the psychology round of SSB
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ReplyDeleteVikas, 23 years old is a member in NGO literacy house which works for adult education .He has been assigned task by his director to organise digitilization awareness programme in some villages of their area. He firstly went to meet block devlopememt officer of area seek permission and ask basic help regarding administration. There after from a team of veterans, made schism formation of team make them aware of digitilizations boon and way to use it and completed the task efficiently. Later on he submitted the whole events data to his director.
You need to work on the way you present your idea as it does not convey the clarity of thought. Also remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB
DeleteVikas, 23 years old is a member in NGO literacy house which works for adult education .He has been assigned task by his director to organise digitilization awareness programme in some villages of their area. He firstly went to meet block devlopememt officer of area seek permission and ask basic help regarding administration. There after from a team of veterans, made schism formation of team .made the villagers aware about digitilizations boon and way to use new technologies and completed the task efficiently. Later on he submitted the whole events report to the director of NGO.
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on the way you present your idea as it does not convey the clarity of thought. Also remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB
DeleteRaghav(27)was a MBA student done with study now he want to commencement of bussiness he has many innovative ideas but he has no capital to invest , so he meet many persons who are willing to invest money in new business where he met Karan(40)he got convenced with ideas of raghav nd ready to give him capital amount,Raghav with his hard work, self believe, and continuous efforts he took the bussiness to the great position now he is renowned business .
ReplyDeleteGood way to represent your perception. remember to reflect your personality in ssb and the psychology round. Self introspection can be the best way to do it.
DeleteAnurag 28, appointed as district collector in bathinda(Punjab).He is brilliant IAS officer know for initiatives among people. After few months of his appointment he came to know the garbage problem in the city nd he decided to resolve the issue. In the picture, he is discussing with his PA about THE appropriate solution. After discussion he gave the tender to a firm for collection of garbage in the city. With his action people praised nd thanked him for solution nd consider him as a real hero. He felt haapy nd satisfied after completing his duty.
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on the way you present your idea as it does not convey the clarity of thought. Also remember to reflect your personality in whatever you do at SSB as its all about your personality.
DeleteSir, how to improve it. Becoz I have clear thought in my mind,how to improve way of Representation
DeleteSir, how to improve it. Becoz I have clear thought in my mind,how to improve way of Representation
DeleteThat can happen with proper practice and deep self introspection, so that the reflection happens properly. Self introspection is the first step for preparation, so prefer doing that in the correct way. The details can be seen on this blog.
DeleteEr. Jatinder is a Assistant Professor of mechanical engineering department in a private engineering colleges.Students of seventh semester of his department put a demand for the industrial tour.He has very much experience of industry therefore they sent Jatinder sir to HOD -Dr. Rohit Rana to negotiate on that proposal. When Dr. Rana heard about it he says that the final exam begans on next month so he can't give permission for that tour. Then Er. Jatinder tells him that the next semester is the training semester so that tour is also for students to select industry for training and also tells about other benifit of training.After hears that he think up to a minute then he says that he allows them for a tour with one condition that they will be attend extra classes for one weak after tour will complete.Er Jatinder as well as students accept s the condition and also thanks to the HOD.Students felt excited.They enjoy the tour and also complete their condition
ReplyDeletethe way of expressing the idea needs improvement and also work on your communication skills. Remember to reflect your personality in psychology round of SSB
DeleteIt was the time of June and Raman has given his college final year exams.He was planning for post graduation ,after checking on internet and consulting his teachers he came across various options ,finally he decided to do masters in management and started preparing for the same .he planned according to exam syllabus and gave separate studying hours to each section ,followed routine strictly and cleared entrance.he appeared in interview after the exam and replied to ever question with confidence and honesty .
ReplyDeleteFinally Aman made it to a good management college
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Generic ideas may not work every time in SSB, new perception and proper reflection of ones personality is the key to success at SSB
DeleteRahul is a 17yr old boy from a small village in Maharashtra.His father is a farmer and his mother is a home maker.Rahul is very intelligent and hardworking since his childhood and wanted to join indian armed forces.He took advice from his school teacher and gathered information regarding various ways to join armed forces.He got to know about NDA exams and started preparing for it.His dedication hard work paid off and he cleared NDA exams and joined the academy.He made his parents proud of himself
ReplyDeleteYou need to do proper self introspection, so that the personality is reflected properly and accurately as the perception needs to be changed and it should be close to reality. Remember to reflect your personality.
DeleteRavi had his viva in college on monday.he waited for his turn and after 1hour his turn came he entered in the room one external examiner was there he told him to sit and started asking questions ravi was replying him comfortably he prepared so well for the viva.in between viva examiner asked him a question from vectors ravi stood from his chair and by using hands explained him the concept examiner gave a laugh and told him to leave.next day viva result declared ravi got A+ for his performance.
ReplyDeletePlease work on the past and future part for making it more appealing and revealing your personality in a better way.
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ReplyDeleteChirag, school captain of his school was called by the principal and tasked him to seek the suggestions from the fellow students and decide a venue for the picnic. He went and called for a meeting with his house captains and tasked them to find a good picnic spot , while all the house captains came with various spots, chirag decided to go to the spot most nearest to school and convinced his mates for investing more on food and music, he went to the principal conveyed the plan ,enjoyed the picnic and clicked many pics
ReplyDeletegood approach followed. Please remember to do self introspection and reveal your qualities appropriately.
DeleteAkshay completed his b tech in mechanical engineering. During indian engineering service interview the officer asked a few questions from engineering mechanics. he answered all question but the the officer asked him that you answeres all questions but why you dont have a good cgpa in your degree. he replied that during the course he had 8 back papers but in the final year i took hard work and all of the papers were cleared and i dont care about my cgpa.i have faith and in my self and the hard work that i taken for the supplymentary examinations were helped me a lot for the upsc ese examination.
ReplyDeleteRahul was a engineering student and head of cultural activities in his college. One day his principal called him for a meeting and tell him that they are going to organise a cultural fest next month. So by taking all the responsibility he arranges all the students, volunteers and makes the list of programmes and participants. On the decisive day all went according to the plans and fest was successful. In the end principal congratulated whole college and fest managing team for their hard and sincere efforts.
ReplyDeleteRAJU was a 23 years old final year ME student of OIST BHOPAL. One fine day he was called upon by the director of the college and was asked to represent institute with his team members at global summit on automative electric bike in india. They were asked to present there model they have 3 months of time which is very less and he accepted the directors proposal and started working with his team on project and also work after college managing there studies at the same time and completed the project and represent the institute at summit and were awarded as the youngest team to present paper at the global level and were also honoured by the college on there success.
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